I really like this. You have really thought it through. Its ambitious but overly ambitious. I like the fact that you have short scenes such as the petrol station which require permission, planning and time and effort for only a few seconds footage, but the rewards will be huge in terms of making it convincing. Thanks frazer for shooting the storyboard side down!!!!!
A thought - experiment with doing an extreme close up of looking down the barrel of the gun. Use a tone or something if you want to improvise, but see what this will look like - it could be a powerful shot - perhaps then we could here a gun shot, which then becomes the loud knocking on the door. Just a thought. How will you light the interrogation? Again, show a little experiment to show this. It is a difficult shot, so do try it out - maybe discuss with me during mock week.
Really good storyboard. However I cant view any of the other planning and Fraser - still no Research after yet again making a promise that you would. You have one last chance now, or i am afraid we will have to place you on a verbal warning. You are the only person in the entire year group not to have done this work.
I really like this. You have really thought it through. Its ambitious but overly ambitious. I like the fact that you have short scenes such as the petrol station which require permission, planning and time and effort for only a few seconds footage, but the rewards will be huge in terms of making it convincing.
ReplyDeleteThanks frazer for shooting the storyboard side down!!!!!
A thought - experiment with doing an extreme close up of looking down the barrel of the gun. Use a tone or something if you want to improvise, but see what this will look like - it could be a powerful shot - perhaps then we could here a gun shot, which then becomes the loud knocking on the door. Just a thought.
How will you light the interrogation? Again, show a little experiment to show this. It is a difficult shot, so do try it out - maybe discuss with me during mock week.
Really good storyboard.
ReplyDeleteHowever I cant view any of the other planning and Fraser - still no Research after yet again making a promise that you would. You have one last chance now, or i am afraid we will have to place you on a verbal warning. You are the only person in the entire year group not to have done this work.
Until I see your planning work and can view it, i can't really alter your grade for the planning.
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